Hi Max

Again, try to include much more detail and images. You are referring to your thought process and reflecting on your progress but this needs to be much more thourough.

Surveys and Drafts 27/01/11

Today, Liam and Harry went back to town, to carry out further surveys. I joined them soon afterwards, so that we could get photos of the cafe and the surrounding area, to put on our flyers. I took a photo of the front of the cafe, and it contrasts well against the shops next door. After I examined Harry's survey results, I took more photos of the surrounding area.

Sometimes it was hard to get the shot right, because Burleigh Street is quite busy, but with some patience it was easy to get some good photos. One idea that Liam had was to take some photos from the top floor of Primark, for an aerial view of the cafe. I'm hoping that these photos will be good on the flyers, possibly as a background.